Hey everyone,
Hope you’re having a good day.
I finally finished editing book 1.
There have been some major changes, I’d recommend reading the first 31 chapters again.
Chapter 1&2 have minor edits
Chapter 3-27 are completely different, the story itself has changed. I think the new version better reflects what I had in mind when I started writing the story, and it also fits better with how the story developed.
The only thing I’d say is to keep in mind this is a younger, less experienced Kane, he’s not had hundreds of chapters of development, but I still think his core personality and motivations are the same.
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Some of the new stuff include
• Different way to awaken inner world
• Birth of Azure
• Kane’s background
• Changes in the litrpg mechanics e.g essence stats
• How to cultivate world tree sutra
• The different levels of the sutra
• Formation of the genesis seed and how it links to world walking
• Some changes to elder Chen Yong’s first appearance in the story and the other elders
• And there’s more!
Chapter 28-30 is the battle between Wu Kangming and Zhou Ming so that hasn’t been changed, just minor edits
Chapter 31 is a new chapter
After that, there is no major changes, just minor edits.
I don’t think it’s perfect so I’d appreciate any feedback you’re able to give.
Just a reminder, from chapter 32 onwards, I still need to edit the stats and size of inner world, and maybe a few other little stuff.
Since you’ll have around 25 chapters of new content to read, I’ll be taking off posting new chapters until Thursday.
See you on Thursday!
