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Common Sense Altering System

Chapter 67 - Six Seven
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Chapter 67: Chapter Six Seven

Ray peeked through the peephole and saw it was Karl. He felt kinda relieved, opened the door, and told him to come in.

Ray looked confused and asked, "Yo, what the hell are you doing here?"

Karl grinned and joked, "C’mon bro, you’re famous now, don’t act brand new like that. Acting all stuck up."

Ray laughed. "Damn, you actually getting funny now."

Karl kept going, "Wild how shit’s been lately though. You get hit with all this weird fame, go viral and shit, and still didn’t expect to be cool with my cousin Kevin."

Ray raised an eyebrow. "I’m the one who didn’t see that coming — Kevin being your cousin."

Karl laughed. "And I still can’t believe you actually got him to go back home and listen to his parents. Dude was dead set on being a musician, stubborn as hell, hahaha..."

Ray chuckled, even though he knew damn well Kevin was just delusional and Ray never actually gave him any real advice.

Then out of nowhere, Karl hit him with, "Yo, let’s go to the gym."

Ray blinked. "Huh? I thought we were gonna talk about your stand-up material?"

Karl waved it off. "Nah, we can do that later. Let’s grab breakfast first, then hit the gym and get a workout in."

Ray asked, "Which gym?"

Karl smirked. "The one you used to mop floors at every day, obviously."

Ray paused, suddenly suspicious. "Hold up... something’s off. Why you acting weird all of a sudden?"

Karl cleared his throat. "Alright, I’mma be real with you bro... I’ve been on roids and... uh..."

Ray narrowed his eyes. "And?"

Karl sighed. "My shit’s expensive as hell, and I’m broke right now. Mia told me she’d give me 50% off if I brought you to the gym with me."

Ray heard that and immediately started dying laughing, holding his stomach.

Karl looked confused as fuck. "Why the hell you laughing, man? You’re not even wondering why Mia wants you at the gym?"

Ray was still cracking up, shaking his head. "Yeah I’m confused, but what’s even funnier is you really thought I didn’t already know you were on roids this whole time."

Karl froze, face turning red. "...You knew? How?!"

Ray finally calmed down a little, still grinning. "From way back, bro. I used to clean that gym, remember? You think I didn’t notice shit? Your body changed crazy fast in just a few months. One time I found a used needle in the trash by your locker with some liquid still in it. I didn’t say nothing ’cause it wasn’t my business. But now you’re telling me this... it’s actually hilarious. You really thought I didn’t hear you bitching about how expensive roids are all the time?"

Karl rubbed his face, looking mad embarrassed. "Damn... you really never said anything. I thought I was good. You not mad?"

Ray shrugged. "Mad for what? You’re the one taking ’em, that’s on you. I was just wondering why you’re only telling me now. But relax, your secret’s safe."

Karl let out a big breath. "Thanks bro... Yeah, Mia really did ask me to bring you. I don’t know what she wants, I just needed that discount bad."

Ray squinted at him, still smirking a little. "So that’s what this is about..."

Karl nodded quick. "Yeah... you down? Breakfast first, then we head straight to the gym."

Ray thought for a second, then stood up and grabbed his jacket. "Aight, fine. But you’re paying for breakfast. And just so we clear — this ain’t just about your discount. I also wanna see Mia’s face when I walk in."

Karl looked relieved. "Bet! Let’s go."

They left the apartment. In the hallway, Karl was still shaking his head, can’t believe his secret got exposed like that. Ray just walked beside him with a little smirk on his face.

In his head though, Ray was already wondering what Mia was really up to. ’Cause he knew her — she wasn’t the type to give discounts just ’cause Karl was broke. There was definitely something else going on.

But that was a problem for later.

Right now? Breakfast.

And then see how funny shit’s about to get at the gym when the viral ex-janitor shows up with broke-ass roid Karl.

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They were grabbing breakfast at a small spot near Ray’s apartment. While eating, Karl kept glancing around like he was waiting for something to pop off.

After a few minutes, Karl leaned in and whispered, "Bro... you’re actually viral right now. But nobody’s clocking you? Shit’s weird as hell."

Ray just shrugged and shoved another spoonful of rice in his mouth. "I don’t even know, man. Maybe my face is too generic. Straight-up default NPC face. People look at me and immediately think, ’Nah, can’t be him,’ then keep walking."

Karl chuckled. "Default? So your face is just... standard edition?"

Ray grinned. "Yup. The type of face nobody remembers. Keeps me safe for now."

Karl shook his head, still laughing quietly. They finished up, Karl paid like he promised, then they hopped in his car and headed to the gym.

Once they were rolling, the vibe inside the car got quieter. Ray leaned back in the passenger seat, staring out the window while his mind wandered somewhere filthy.

Just yesterday, his Alter Building got upgraded. The max duration jumped up significantly. And today was gonna be the first real test run.

At the car.

Ray felt his cock starting to throb, blood rushing down hard. Mia’s face instantly flashed in his head. That bitch used to humiliate him constantly back when he was the cleaning guy — always yelling at him in front of everyone, acting like a power-tripping queen when she was just the owner’s wife. Loved talking shit and roasting him whenever she felt like it.

And right now, Ray was sitting there with a raging hard-on, dick straining painfully against his pants.

He kept picturing what he’d do when he finally got her alone. Thirty minutes with the upgraded Alter Building. More than enough time to break her.

He imagined her on her knees, that arrogant face still trying to look superior — right before he started smacking his heavy cock against her cheeks. Hard, repeated slaps, turning her skin red and messy. He’d keep going until the proud bitch was crying, drooling, and begging for mercy.

His cock twitched aggressively in his sweats. Ray shifted in his seat slowly, trying to hide the massive bulge.

Karl, focused on driving, kept yapping about random gym shit, completely clueless. Meanwhile, Ray was next to him fantasizing about all the nasty, degrading shit he was gonna do to Mia with his dick.

Ray swallowed thickly, voice a little hoarse as he muttered, "Thirty minutes..."

Karl glanced over. "Huh? You say something?"

Ray flashed a small smirk, playing it cool. "Nah. Just thinking."

When they pulled into the gym parking lot, Ray was surprised the second he stepped out. The place was packed — wall-to-wall girls, loud music, buzzing energy.

"Yo, why the hell is it this crowded? This place is usually a ghost town," Ray said.

Karl grinned as he killed the engine. "They got a bunch of discounts for chicks now. Mia probably hopped on some trend. Her and Mike’s situation is straight-up messy too. Lots of wild rumors, especially after everyone found out Mike was messing around with a male member. Now they jacked up the guys’ membership prices and made it cheap for girls. Smart business, I guess."

Ray raised an eyebrow. "Bet you’re loving all the pussy in here."

Karl just shook his head. As they walked toward the entrance, Karl muttered, "Most of them are in their 30s though. Barely any younger ones. And they act all stuck-up and judgmental toward guys. That’s why weekends are dead for dudes now. They call us useless, toxic, whatever."

Ray’s grin widened. A dirty thought hit him instantly:

’Fuck... perfect faces to paint with cum.’

Suddenly Karl stopped right before the door. "Uh... I’m heading out, bro."

Ray turned, confused. "What? I thought we were working out together?"

Karl looked uncomfortable. "Sorry man, I can’t do it today. I was just supposed to drop you off. Please... you’re my guy. I’ll come pick you up later, I swear."

Ray looked even more lost. "It’s that serious?"

Karl sighed. "Yeah, bro. Look around — it’s all women working today. I don’t want the headache. Just go straight to Mia’s face. She only told me to bring you here."

Ray paused, then nodded casually. "Aight. As your bestie, I got you. Let’s go."

Karl looked relieved as hell and quickly dipped back to his car. Ray walked toward the gym entrance with a chill stride, even though his cock was rock-hard and throbbing in his pants.

His mind was already racing.

’Now I’m about to step into pussy paradise.’

Ray smiled faintly as he pushed open the gym door. His eyes scanned the crowd for Mia. His chest burned with old grudges and raw, unrestrained lust.

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