Chapter 121: Author's Note
Finally, it’s time for the book to be released. Let me share some thoughts in the process.
Firstly, let’s talk about this book. The plot developed smoothly, with a good foundation laid in the beginning that quickly filled in the gaps. I think it turned out quite well.
After reading some reviews, many people couldn’t handle the part about marriage and labeled it as a turning point.
Some criticized that the initial twenty chapters were well-written, and despite minor flaws, it was a good read. They found the conflict introduced with Tang Xuan’s marriage somewhat inexplicable, questioning the need for such a storyline.
To be honest, when I was writing the first twenty chapters, I was afraid the plot might be too plain, so I wanted to introduce a conflict, a plot twist.
Unexpectedly, a misstep can become a lasting regret. Well, that’s fine. Readers who can endure the marriage part should be able to continue reading.
In hindsight, it would have been better to know what the readers liked or disliked about the plot. It would have helped avoid pitfalls later on, rather than surprising readers with a plot twist after the book is released, potentially driving them away.
Regarding the criticism about the marriage part in the reviews, I’ve mostly left them untouched. A book without any criticism is truly cold.
As for some mindless criticisms, I deleted them.
For instance, when the book got recommended on the app, someone actually said my writing was so bad that being recommended on the app must be due to personal connections with the editors.
I couldn’t help but laugh at that. If there were such opportunities, that would be great!
I’ll cover the hotel expenses!!!
I’ll rely on your recommendations for what comes next.
It’s all just a joke.
I can accept constructive criticism about the plot, as everyone has different tastes.
Of course, the comment in one review stating that I am a high school student really caught me off guard.
As for the upcoming plot, you can probably guess it – filling in the gaps about the battle at Zhenling Pass and the secrets of Jinyang City. A big battle is inevitable, and I’m thinking about how to depict that grand scene.
As for the protagonist showing off and overturning situations, don’t expect it for now. This isn’t an invincible or fantasy power-fantasy novel. Why should the protagonist, who has just crossed over, always encounter enemies slightly stronger and engage in face-smashing battles?
That’s not scientific!
But his wife will definitely show off. Oh, she doesn’t need to pretend.
The following is a pitiful segment.
Yesterday, I had a late-night snack, and this morning, I weighed myself and found I gained weight again. The progress in losing weight in the front has gone down the drain.
Ice cream is getting more and more expensive, and I can’t afford it anymore, especially that person surnamed Zhong; it’s outrageous.
The stock market’s overall trend is not good, keeping investors on edge all day.
Although I don’t trade stocks.
You guys shouldn’t either, take the money out, just subscribe to my “uh-huh.”
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